The Perfect Cupcake
Once upon a kingdom, on Valentine's Day the queen of hearts was born. Although, she had no manners at all.
27 years later,
" What do you want for lunch queen Emily?" one elf asked, out of a thousand, and they are all her hand size, can you believe it? "Cupcakes with marshmallows and cinnamon with icing, and one more thing, you better hurry up or I will rip your little elf ears off!"
15 minutes later,
"Hurry guys, the time is running out, get that cinnamon straight and let's go!" cried an elf frankly.
"Ooooohhhhh good, just in time for lunch.
15 minutes later,
"Hurry guys, the time is running out, get that cinnamon straight and let's go!" cried an elf frankly.
"Ooooohhhhh good, just in time for lunch.
Your story was very good.
ReplyDeleteIts just a phrase I made up.
DeleteHey your story is very creative. Although in the begging, "Once upon a kingdom" its creative but it doesn't really make sense. Also, you need some other punctuation and grammar. Also in the picture it is two men standing on the cupcake, are those supposed to be the elfs? In all good story!
ReplyDeleteHey your story is very creative. Although in the begging, "Once upon a kingdom" its creative but it doesn't really make sense. Also, you need some other punctuation and grammar. Also in the picture it is two men standing on the cupcake, are those supposed to be the elfs? In all good story!
ReplyDeleteim confused the begging says once opon a kingdom doesnt really flow but every thing else is good
ReplyDeleteYour story was pretty good, but I think you should've used some powerful words, but it was a really good story.
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